Why start with the third novel in Jim Butcher’s Codex Alera series? Well, it’s the best way to evaluate a series: how strong is the overall story, how complete is the world, how engaging are the characters, and how capable is the author (particularly with backstory)? In this case, Butcher excels in all areas.
From the (lackluster) back cover blurb:
When the power-hungry High Lord of Kalare launches a merciless rebellion against the First Lord, young Tavi of Calderon joins a newly formed Legion under an assumed name. And when the ruthless Kalare allies himself with a savage enemy of the Realm, Tavi finds himself leading an inexperienced, poorly equipped Legion—the only force standing between Alera and certain doom…
An Aside on Back Cover Synopses
I called it lackluster, but the back cover synopsis is pretty much the norm for epic fantasy. Is the main character loyal and honorable? Check (after all, he’s joining a Legion.) Facing a ruthless and merciless antagonist? Check. Facing savage enemies of the realm? Check. Standing between the realm and certain doom? Check.
Unfortunately, the mid-series blurb is hard to write and it rarely conveys much about the series. There’s no space to explain the overarching conflict (just a reference to the “power-hungry High Lord of Kalare” rebelling against “the First Lord”), a conflict which must be composed of intrigue, politics, power struggles, and warfare—because this is epic fantasy. And, unless we’re familiar with Tavi and why he’s so integral to this (epic) conflict, the blurb will merely reinforce the book’s sub-genre. That’s also the biggest job of the cover—telegraphing it’s sub-genre and type to the readers who will be interested in it. At the least, the blurb and cover must promise epic deeds and warfare, generally in a world rife with danger and magic, even if we don’t yet understand the specifics of the plot.
Backstory: A Necessity, But Not an Evil
What generally can’t be related in mid-series blurbs or synopses is backstory. Most beginning fiction writers groan when they try to season their beginning chapters with backstory. Likewise, most craft books treat backstory like it’s a necessary evil—something that must be provided to the reader, as well as being onerous and tricky for the writer (well, it’s certainly onerous for the reader if the writer isn’t doing a good job).
Here’s another take: I submit that backstory is what makes a character interesting and drives the story forward. Backstory forms questions about the character that the reader wants answered. Backstory builds mystery about a character and drives character motivation.
When we read stand-alone romances, thrillers, or mysteries—we can’t form attachments to characters without the author providing tidbits of backstory. Why should we care if Amy isn’t interested in the hunky hero? (Hint… her previous relationship ended in tragedy). Why should we care if Sarah is being followed and watched at night? (Hint… she might be under Witness Protection). Why should we care if Hank is missing? (Hint… he’s a great husband and father but he has a dark past…) Read more »
